What this lesson is for
They already have the four-paragraph shape from the opinion essay, so structure is not the work here. The work is content: producing two developed causes instead of four thin ones, and then producing measures that visibly answer those causes. Almost every weak script fails in one of two ways, and both are fixable on the page: causes written where problems were asked for, and a solutions paragraph that has drifted off to a different subject. Stage 2 fixes the first. Stage 3 fixes the second, and is the centre of the lesson. If you run short of time, cut Stage 4, not Stage 3.
Materials
- Board space. The pattern board from Stage 1 stays up all lesson.
- This page on every student device, joined to the room.
- A clock. Every writing task here is timed and the times are called aloud.
- The dashboard open on your own screen from Stage 2 onwards β you read their answers live and correct from them.
Procedure
Stage 1: What a problem and solution essay is (25 min)
Interaction: whole class, then individual
Goal: they can see the four paragraphs, and they can say which half of the question each middle paragraph answers.
- Write this question on the board and leave it there all lesson:
In many countries, the amount of rubbish people throw away is increasing. Why is this happening? What can be done about it?
Ask the room for one reason why, out loud. Take three or four. 2 min - Two questions, not one. Underline the two halves of the question in different colours. Say it plainly: there are two questions on the board, and an essay that answers only one of them cannot pass. Ask which half most students forget. (The first. They rush to solutions.) 3 min
- Two halves, read them both. Put the wordings up. Ask one question: what is the same in every row? The answer you want: there are always two questions, so there are always two middle paragraphs. What each half asks for is what changes. 4 min
The question can ask Body 1 must contain Body 2 must contain Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? causes measures What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? reasons a method, not measures What problems does this cause? How could the situation be improved? problems measures Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive development? causes a judgement, not measures Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages? causes disadvantages, not measures The line to say: body 2 does whatever the second half literally asked for. Today that is measures, and today is the hardest version, because the measures have to answer body 1 one for one. But look at the last two rows before you leave: a student who has learned body 2 is always solutions will write measures for a question that asked whether the development is a good one, and lose half the marks for task response.Where this comes from: across Cambridge 12 to 21, only one Task 2 question in forty asks for solutions, and eight are two-part questions whose second half is something else. Do not tell them the statistic. Do make sure the habit you build today is read the second half, not write solutions.Point at the question marks: every row has two, because the exam writes the two halves as two separate sentences. Count them out loud. Two question marks means two middle paragraphs, and a student who reads the pair as one question will answer half of it and cap their task response at band 5. - Draw the pattern board. Leave it up all lesson. 4 min
- Send them to Worksheet 1. Read the model essay aloud once while they follow it on the screen. 5 min
- They tap the seven answers on their own, then check together. 7 min
THE ANSWER 250+ words Β· 40 minutes Β· 4 paragraphs
INTRODUCTION 2 sentences
1 the situation in your own words
2 the answer in outline: my causes, and my measures
BODY 1 TWO causes (or problems) cause 1 Β· cause 2
BODY 2 TWO measures, SAME ORDER for 1 Β· for 2
CONCLUSION 1-2 sentences
the causes and the measures together, different wordsCheck questions
- How many questions are on the board? (two)
- Which paragraph answers the second half? (body 2)
- How many causes do I need? (two, both explained)
- Can I put a new measure in the conclusion? (no)
Stage 2: Finding causes: two, not four (30 min)
Interaction: whole class, then individual
Goal: they can tell a cause from a problem, and they can take one cause and make four sentences out of it instead of naming four causes and explaining none.
- Cause or problem? Two columns on the board, WHY IT HAPPENS and WHAT IT DOES. Take the rubbish topic and ask for one of each. Give the test out loud: a cause comes before the situation, a problem comes after it. Draw an arrow through the middle so they can see the order. 5 min
CAUSES THE SITUATION PROBLEMS why it happens ββββββββββββββββΊ what it does packaging more rubbish landfill sites fill up cheap to replace plastic in the sea
- Send them to Worksheet 2. Six statements, cause or problem. They tap on their own. 6 minRead the dashboard before you take feedback. Numbers 3 and 5 are the ones that split a class. Find two students who disagreed, and ask each to say before or after? Do not give the answer until both have answered.
- Two, not four. Go to paragraph B of the model and cut it up on the board. Two causes, two sentences each. Then write four thin causes underneath it in a list and ask which one the examiner can mark. The rule: a cause you cannot say two sentences about is not a cause you should use. 6 min
Move Sentence from paragraph B Cause 1 Β· name it The clearest cause is the amount of packaging that manufacturers now use. Cause 1 Β· explain it Almost every item in a supermarket arrives wrapped in plastic, and food that was once sold loose is now sealed in trays, boxes and film, all of which is thrown away the moment the product is opened. Cause 2 Β· name it A second, less obvious cause is that we have grown used to replacing things rather than repairing them. Cause 2 Β· explain it Electrical goods in particular are now so cheap, and repairs so expensive, that a broken kettle or printer is simply put out with the rubbish and a new one ordered the same afternoon. Point out: neither explanation uses for example. Both explain by saying how the cause works: what people actually do, step by step. That is what a developed cause looks like. - Put the two questions they will write on today up on the board, and the phrases for naming a cause and naming a problem. Then give the two groups that do the explaining. 3 min
To do this Say Carry a consequence forward X leads to β¦ Β· X results in β¦ Β· β¦, which in turn β¦ Β· β¦, with the result that β¦ Put a reason inside a problem This stems largely from β¦ Β· The reason this matters is that β¦ Β· β¦, and because [reason], the effect is felt most by β¦ Β· What makes this worse is that β¦ On the second row: a reason is allowed inside a problems paragraph, but only underneath the problem. Give them the test: cross out the reason sentences. If the paragraph still answers the question, they were development. If it does not, they have written a causes paragraph for a problems question. - Worksheet 3, part A. They pick one of the two questions and fill the four boxes: cause 1, explain, cause 2, explain. Ten minutes, called at five. 10 min
NAMING A CAUSE The clearest cause is ...
A second, less obvious / equally important,
cause is ...
This is largely the result of ...
Much of the blame lies with ...
NAMING A PROBLEM The most serious problem is ...
A second, and equally damaging, problem is ...
The clearest consequence of this is ...
This creates particular difficulties for ...
EXPLAINING EITHER two sentences, and they say HOW:
who does what, and what happens next
NOT WORTH USING anything you cannot say two sentences aboutCheck questions
- Does a cause come before or after the situation? (before)
- Does a problem come before or after? (after)
- How many sentences must each cause have? (at least two)
- Is four causes better than two? (no, it is worse)
Stage 3: Matching solutions: the centre of the lesson (30 min)
Interaction: whole class, then individual
Goal: every measure they write answers a cause they have already named, and they can see on the page when it does not.
- Show the drift. Read paragraph B of the model again, then read this out as if it were paragraph C: The government should build more recycling centres, and schools should teach children about the environment from an early age. Ask one question and wait: which of my two causes does that answer? Let them find that the answer is neither. Say the name for it: drift. 4 minDo not skip the wait. The sentence sounds good, and that is exactly the point. Students write it because it sounds like an IELTS answer. They have to hear it fail against their own causes before the rule means anything.
- Now read the real paragraph C and put the pairs in a table on the board. Say the rule: same order, and the words of the cause come back in the measure. 5 min
Cause (body 1) Measure (body 2) The words that tie them Manufacturers use too much packaging. Tax the packaging, so supermarkets pay for every tray and wrapper. packaging We replace things instead of repairing them. Refund part of the cost of a repair, as several European countries do. repair The test to give them: underline one word in your cause, and find that same word in your measure. If it is not there, the measure is answering a different essay. - The second model. Send them to the second model, which is the problems wording rather than causes. Read both middle paragraphs aloud. One question: which problem does the bus lane answer, and which one does the charge answer? Then point at the order: same pair, same sequence. 5 min
- Worksheet 4. Six measures, and they choose which of the two causes each one answers, or neither. Tap on their own. 6 minRead the dashboard, then correct from it. Two of the six are drift. Put one of them on the board and ask the class to rewrite it so that it does answer cause 2. Take the best version out loud.
- Worksheet 3, part B. Back to their own causes from Stage 2, and now the two measures underneath them, in the same order. Ten minutes, called at five. 10 min
BODY 2 the measures, in the SAME ORDER as the causes
MEASURE 1 name it The most effective measure would be to ...
explain who does it Β· what changes because of it
MEASURE 2 name it A second step would be to ...
explain who does it Β· what changes because of it
BETTER In order to [restate the cause], governments should ...
The obvious answer to [restate the cause] is ...
these two put the cause back in for you
WHO ACTS? governments Β· schools Β· companies Β· individuals
name one. "Something should be done" is not a measure.
THE TEST one word from the cause must appear in the measureCheck questions
- Which cause does measure 1 answer? (cause 1)
- Can I write a measure for a cause I did not name? (no)
- Must I say who does it? (yes, name the actor)
Stage 4: The introduction and the conclusion (25 min)
Interaction: whole class, then individual
Goal: two sentences at each end, and nothing new in either. They have this shape from the opinion essay, so this stage moves fast.
- Put the model's introduction and conclusion side by side. Ask what is the same and what is different. Answer: same two causes and two measures, different words. 5 min
The model essay Intro, sentence 2 In my view the main causes are excessive packaging and the low cost of replacing things that break, and governments will have to act on both. Conclusion In conclusion, we throw away more because more is wrapped and less is worth mending. Taxing packaging and subsidising repair would deal with both, and I believe governments should act on them together. The difference from the opinion essay: sentence 2 here is not an opinion, it is a map. It names the causes and the measures in outline, so the examiner knows the shape of the essay before reading it. Say that out loud, because they will otherwise write a position statement out of habit. - Give the openers and the ban list. Nothing new: no third cause, no extra measure, no but it depends. 4 min
- Worksheet 5. The same question they wrote their bodies on. Introduction first, then the conclusion that matches it. Six minutes each. 12 min
- Tell them to read their own introduction and conclusion one after the other and count the words that are the same. If a whole sentence is the same, they rewrite it. 4 min
INTRODUCTION 1 the situation in your own words
2 the map: causes + measures, in outline
"In my view this is mainly the result of X and Y,
and both can be addressed."
CONCLUSION In conclusion, ...
the same causes and measures, different words
NOTHING NEWStage 5: Teacher check, the clock, homework (15 min)
Interaction: whole class
Goal: they see their own matching corrected in front of the class, so the last thing they take home is the rule from Stage 3.
- You read, not them. Open PS Β· Causes and measures on the dashboard and put it on the screen. Take three students, and for each one read body 1 and body 2 aloud and draw the two lines. Say which pair matches and which one drifts. Nothing else. 8 minPick the three before you start. One clean match, one drift, and one where the measure is right but the order is swapped. That last one is the most useful of the three and the easiest to miss, so choose it deliberately while they are still writing in Stage 3.
- One question to the room, not to an individual: whose measure could you move into a completely different essay without changing a word? That is the definition of drift, and it is the sentence to delete. 3 min
- Put the 40-minute clock on the board and set the homework. They now have all four paragraphs, so the first full essay is homework, not classwork. 4 min
0-5 PLAN cause 1 Β· cause 2 β measure 1 Β· measure 2 5-35 WRITE intro Β· causes Β· measures Β· conclusion 35-40 CHECK two lines, and they do not cross
Homework
- Essay 1, 40 minutes: In many countries, the number of people who are overweight is increasing. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
- Essay 2, on another day: In many cities, young people are finding it harder to afford somewhere to live. What problems does this cause? How could the situation be improved?
- In both: two causes or problems in body 1, two measures in body 2 in the same order, and a conclusion that names the same two pairs in different words. Underline one word in each cause and find it again in the measure.
- Revise the lesson and redo any task you answered incorrectly.
- Writing videos for Task 2 in the workbook.
- Complex sentences: five new sentences for each structure, using cause and result language β leads to, results in, so that, by -ing.
- Topic vocabulary: the next topics, about 100 words on each, using at least five words or phrases from the list.
- Listening and reading: the next mock on learne.org with no break, then transcribe the most difficult section of the same test. Analyse every wrong answer.
- Ongoing: speaking practice, shadowing, Blue Murphy three units on your own mistakes, three posts.
What to read on the dashboard
- Worksheet 1 marks itself. Anyone who got 5 or 6 wrong has not separated the two halves of the question yet.
- Worksheet 2 is the fastest diagnostic in the lesson. A student who calls a problem a cause will write the wrong body 1 in the exam, every time.
- Worksheet 3 is the one to read properly. Put part A and part B side by side and draw the two lines. Crossed lines mean the order is wrong; a line with nowhere to land means drift.
- Worksheet 4: numbers 3 and 6 are the drift items. Anyone who accepted them will accept their own drift too.
- Worksheet 5: check the introduction names two causes and two measures, and that the conclusion names the same two pairs.
Worksheet 1: the model essay
The question: In many countries, the amount of rubbish people throw away is increasing. Why is this happening? What can be done about it?
A (1) It is true that households in most countries now throw away
far more than they did a generation ago. (2) In my view the main
causes are excessive packaging and the low cost of replacing
things that break, and governments will have to act on both.
B The clearest cause is the amount of packaging that
manufacturers now use. Almost every item in a supermarket
arrives wrapped in plastic, and food that was once sold loose
is now sealed in trays, boxes and film, all of which is thrown
away the moment the product is opened. A second, less obvious
cause is that we have grown used to replacing things rather
than repairing them. Electrical goods in particular are now so
cheap, and repairs so expensive, that a broken kettle or
printer is simply put out with the rubbish and a new one
ordered the same afternoon.
C Both of these can be addressed, but only by governments.
Packaging is a cost that manufacturers pass on to the public,
so it should be taxed: if supermarkets had to pay for every
tray and film wrapper they used, loose fruit and refillable
containers would appear on the shelves within a year. The habit
of replacing rather than repairing needs the opposite
treatment, an incentive rather than a penalty. Several European
countries now refund part of the cost of a repair, and the
effect has been to make repair shops viable again in towns
where they had disappeared.
D In conclusion, we throw away more because more is wrapped and
less is worth mending. Taxing packaging and subsidising repair
would deal with both, and I believe governments should act on
them together.
276 words Β· band 9Part A. What does each paragraph do?
Paragraph A
Paragraph B
Paragraph C
Paragraph D
Part B. Three more questions about the same essay.
5. Sentence 2 of the introduction does what?
6. How many causes are in paragraph B?
7. The measures in paragraph C are in which order?
Worksheet 2: cause or problem?
The situation is: more and more people are becoming overweight. A cause comes before the situation and explains why it happens. A problem comes after it and says what it does to people. Which is each of these?
CAUSES THE SITUATION PROBLEMS why it happens ββββββββββββββββΊ what it does
1. Fast food is cheaper and quicker than cooking at home.
2. Hospitals are spending far more on treating diabetes than they used to.
3. Children spend their free time on screens rather than outdoors.
4. People take fewer days off work when they are fit and healthy.
5. Employers lose working days to illness among their staff.
6. Most people now travel to work by car rather than on foot or by bicycle.
A second model: the problems wording
The question: In many cities, traffic congestion is getting worse. What problems does this cause, and how could the situation be improved? This one asks for problems, not causes, so body 1 changes. Body 2 does not.
B The most serious problem is the time that people lose. A
commute that should take twenty minutes can take an hour in a
large city, and that hour is taken from the same people every
morning and every evening; over a working year it amounts to
several weeks of a person's life spent sitting still. There is
also the damage done to the air. Vehicles queuing with their
engines running are the largest single source of the pollution
that city dwellers breathe, and rates of asthma among children
living beside main roads are noticeably higher as a result.
C The lost time can only be recovered by taking cars off the
road, which means making the alternative genuinely faster.
Cities that have built bus lanes separated from the traffic
have found that once a bus visibly overtakes the queue of cars,
drivers begin to change of their own accord. The air needs a
second measure aimed directly at it: a charge for driving into
the centre. London introduced one in 2003, and the volume of
traffic entering the zone fell immediately, taking the worst of
the pollution with it.
PROBLEM 1 lost time βββΊ MEASURE 1 separated bus lanes
PROBLEM 2 polluted air βββΊ MEASURE 2 a congestion chargeWorksheet 3: your two causes, then your two measures
Choose one of these two questions and use it for the rest of the lesson.
| The question | |
|---|---|
| Question 1 | In many countries, the number of people who are overweight is increasing. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? |
| Question 2 | In many cities, young people are finding it harder to afford somewhere to live. What problems does this cause? How could the situation be improved? |
Which question did you choose?
Part A: body 1
CAUSE 1 name it The clearest cause is ...
explain two sentences. HOW does it work?
who does what, and what happens next
CAUSE 2 name it A second, less obvious / equally important,
cause is ...
explain two sentences
IF YOUR QUESTION ASKED FOR PROBLEMS, NOT CAUSES
name it The most serious problem is ...
A second, and equally damaging, problem is ...
explain X leads to ... ... , which in turn ...
X results in ... ... , with the result that ...
a reason? This stems largely from ...
What makes this worse is that ...
Only under the problem, never instead of it.
If you cannot write two sentences about it, do not use it.Cause 1 β name it, one sentence
Cause 1 β explain it, two sentences
Cause 2 β name it, one sentence
Cause 2 β explain it, two sentences
Part B: body 2
MEASURE 1 name it The most effective measure would be to ...
explain who does it Β· what changes because of it
MEASURE 2 name it A second step would be to ...
explain who does it Β· what changes because of it
BETTER In order to [restate cause 1], governments should ...
The obvious answer to [restate cause 2] is ...
these two put the cause back in for you
BANNED "Something should be done."
"The government should raise awareness."
"People should be educated."Measure 1 β for cause 1. Name it, one sentence
Measure 1 β explain it, two sentences
Measure 2 β for cause 2. Name it, one sentence
Measure 2 β explain it, two sentences
Now test it. Write the one word that appears in both cause 1 and measure 1, and the one word that appears in both cause 2 and measure 2.
Worksheet 4: which cause does it answer?
A student wrote these two causes for the question about rubbish:
CAUSE 1 Manufacturers wrap almost everything in plastic packaging. CAUSE 2 People replace broken things instead of repairing them.
Now decide what each of these measures actually answers. Two of them answer neither, even though they sound like good IELTS sentences.
1. Supermarkets should be charged a tax on every plastic tray and wrapper they use.
2. Manufacturers should be required to make spare parts available for ten years after a product goes on sale.
3. Schools should teach children about the importance of protecting the environment.
4. Shops should be obliged to sell fruit and vegetables loose, so that customers can bring their own containers.
5. The cost of a repair should be partly refunded, so that mending a kettle is cheaper than replacing it.
6. The government should build more recycling centres in every large city.
Worksheet 5: the introduction and the conclusion
Same question as Worksheet 3. Write the introduction first, then the conclusion that matches it. Six minutes each.
INTRODUCTION 1 the situation in your own words. Do not copy.
2 the map: my two causes + my two measures
CONCLUSION In conclusion, ...
the same two pairs, in different words
NOTHING NEW no third cause Β· no extra measureIntroduction, sentence 1 β the situation in your own words
Introduction, sentence 2 β your causes and measures in outline
Conclusion
Appendix: the boards
BOARD 1 (Stage 1) stays up all lesson
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In many countries, the amount of rubbish people throw away is
increasing. Why is this happening? What can be done about it?
β² β²
first question second question
INTRODUCTION 2 sentences
1 the situation in your own words
2 the map: my causes, and my measures
BODY 1 TWO causes (or problems) cause 1 Β· cause 2
BODY 2 TWO measures, SAME ORDER for 1 Β· for 2
CONCLUSION the same two pairs, different words
BOARD 2 (Stage 2) causes are not problems
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CAUSES THE SITUATION PROBLEMS
why it happens ββββββββββββββββΊ what it does
packaging more rubbish landfill fills up
cheap to replace plastic in the sea
NAMING A CAUSE The clearest cause is ...
A second, less obvious / equally important, cause is ...
This is largely the result of ...
Much of the blame lies with ...
NAMING A PROBLEM The most serious problem is ...
A second, and equally damaging, problem is ...
The clearest consequence of this is ...
This creates particular difficulties for ...
EXPLAINING IT two sentences that say HOW:
who does what, and what happens next
X leads to ... ... , which in turn ...
X results in ... ... , with the result that ...
A REASON INSIDE This stems largely from ...
A PROBLEM The reason this matters is that ...
What makes this worse is that ...
Under the problem, never instead of it.
NOT WORTH USING anything you cannot say two sentences about
BOARD 3 (Stage 3) the matching board
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CAUSE 1 packaging βββΊ MEASURE 1 tax the packaging
CAUSE 2 replace it βββΊ MEASURE 2 refund the repair
same order Β· lines do not cross
MEASURE name it The most effective measure would be to ...
A second step would be to ...
explain who does it Β· what changes because of it
BETTER In order to [restate the cause], governments should ...
The obvious answer to [restate the cause] is ...
WHO ACTS governments Β· schools Β· companies Β· individuals
"Something should be done" is not a measure.
THE TEST one word from the cause appears in the measure
DRIFT "Schools should raise awareness of the environment."
Good sentence. Answers neither cause. Delete it.
BOARD 4 (Stages 4 and 5) the ends, and the clock
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INTRO s2 "In my view this is mainly the result of X and Y,
and both can be addressed."
CONCLUSION In conclusion, ... same two pairs, new words
NOTHING NEW
0-5 PLAN cause 1 Β· cause 2 β measure 1 Β· measure 2
5-35 WRITE
35-40 CHECK two lines, and they do not crossAnswer key in one place
| Sheet | Answers |
|---|---|
| 1 Β· Model essay | 1 introduction Β· 2 the causes Β· 3 the measures Β· 4 conclusion Β· 5 names my causes and my measures in outline Β· 6 two Β· 7 the same order as the causes |
| 2 Β· Cause or problem | 1 a cause Β· 2 a problem Β· 3 a cause Β· 4 neither (it describes healthy people, not this situation) Β· 5 a problem Β· 6 a cause. Number 4 is the one to discuss: it is true, but it is not about the situation in the question at all. |
| 3 Β· Causes and measures | No key. Check: two sentences in each explain box, an actor named in each measure, and box 10 filled with two real words that appear in both halves. If box 10 is empty or vague, the matching has not happened. |
| 4 Β· Which cause does it answer | 1 cause 1 Β· 2 cause 2 Β· 3 neither Β· 4 cause 1 Β· 5 cause 2 Β· 6 neither. Items 3 and 6 are the drift. Both are reasonable measures about rubbish and neither answers a cause this writer named. |
| 5 Β· Introduction and conclusion | No key. Check against their Worksheet 3: the introduction names the same two causes and two measures, and the conclusion names them again in different words with nothing added. |
If this lesson goes wrong
- They write four causes. They are treating the paragraph as a list. Cover three of the four with your hand and ask them to say two more sentences about the one that is left. They can, and that is the point.
- Body 1 is problems when the question said why. Send them to the question on the board, not to their paragraph. Make them read the first half aloud before they rewrite anything.
- Every measure is education or awareness. Ban both words for the rest of the lesson and make them name an actor and an action instead. It is uncomfortable for five minutes and then it works.
- Stage 3 runs over. Let it. Take the time out of Stage 4, which they can largely do from the opinion essay lesson already.
